I like how you described each image that was shown, but the slide show might be a little to fast and not give people enough time to read each images explanation.
I like hoe you took a desert temple and made it your house. I especially liked how you personalized it.
I like how his dream room is a temple and how he placed things in his dream room.
I liked how you took the sand temple on the outside and added your own flair to it.
I think its cool that you found something naturally generated and made it your own but I also think that you could have added a little bit more decoration.
Something great about your room is shape of it. I like the different materials and blocks that you use.
I like how you built your house in a sandy desert that overlooks the water and forest. You picked a great spot for your house!
I am a seventh grade media arts student at events grade. I'm excited to use video